REYYSMAAN AVUDDAIYAR
Prose fiction (Flash fiction)
Walking
at the corridor looking into each and every classroom. Every time I crossed,
there were tiny, little pairs of eyes that were noticing me. I felt a sense of
responsibility in myself. Suddenly, my legs felt numb. I couldn’t walk ahead.
My heart dropped looking at the teacher canning his student. Memories started
to flood. That incident reminded me of my teacher punishing me for not
completing my homework. I still could remember how embarrassing was it for me
to get punished in front of my friends. Some even smirked at me. That embarrassment
turned into frustration and that frustration turned into vengeance. Not vengeance
towards my teacher, but towards my friends. I badly wanted to show them that I can
be successful too. The image of my friends smirking at me flashed in my mind
whenever I felt like giving up. Now, I am standing here in the school as a
future teacher looking at the same incident that happened to me a decade ago. I
believe that I am on the right track of my life right now. I believe I am successful
now, but there is still a long way to go. I continued my steps. I noticed the
student’s paw-like-hands trembling in fear. He wanted to cry but at the same
time didn’t want to get embarrassed in front of his friends. The teacher’s eyes
were holding total anger but at the same time were dilated, as he is guilty of
punishing the little creature. I can’t accuse the teacher for being mean as the
same punishment had made me who am I today. As I walked, I saw the cleaner
watering the flowers. Why does the cleaner has to water the plants every day
although she knows it will take a long time for them to grow? That is what meant
by effort. Teachers are like the cleaners. It will take a lot of effort for
them to shape students and they should never give up. If the cleaner stops
watering the plants, the plants will wilt. If teachers give up on their students,
students will fail in their lives. Cleaners might change, but the flower will
continue growing if it gets enough water every day.
Prose non-fiction (Travel
writing)
Last day of School-Based
Report
It
was six past twenty when I woke up. I sighed slightly remembering how sad it was to leave one of the best schools in Kelantan. Anyways I had a sense of relief,
as I’m about to escape from the headmaster. His sharp look towards me has freaked
me out throughout the week. I got up, had my bath and prepared myself for
school. We wore our green t-shirt, as the school conducts sports on every
Thursday morning. While heading to the school, I saw the beautiful paddy field blab
la. I thanked God for his creation. Upon arriving at the school, we parked our
car near the canteen as the usual parking spot is used to play netball. We walked
to the office and clocked in our punch cards. After keeping our bags in the
library, we headed to the hall and saw the teachers striving hard to make sure
the seven years old kids reduce their noise. One of the teachers eyes suddenly
turned towards us. She had a grin smile on her face and I knew the reason. She
asked us to conduct the session. We were panicked as we were not prepared at all,
but at the same time we have to take up the challenge as we are the future
teachers. One of us quickly suggested aerobics. Fortunately, Nabhan is an aerobics
conductor and he remembered the steps. I went to the backstage and took out the
long, black wire to connect it to my phone. We couldn’t stop smiling as we didn’t
expect this to happen. Without thinking further, we just followed the steps
made by our beloved aerobics instructor. We played four songs and each one of
us took turns to take videos of us conducting the aerobics session. Everything
went fine till the Nabhan handed me the microphone and asked me to conduct the
next session. Muzammil suggested me to conduct the ‘Simon Says’ activity with
the students. It was indeed embarrassing, but I am a future teacher. I took up
the challenge. I have to admit that the kids followed my instructions very well.
I could barely notice students who followed the wrong instructions. Suddenly,
my hands trembled. He is back. The headmaster walked passing the students. Why
does he have to walk when I am conducting the session? I ignored him as much as
possible and continued my session with the pupils. The session ended smoothly
and all the students were very joyful. Next was the evaluation. We went to the
office and met the headmaster. He asked us to wait at the meeting room. All of
us were tensed as it was our first time getting evaluated by a headmaster in a
meeting room. We entered the meeting room imagining it as a haunted house. As he
entered, all sort of feelings hit me. I was only able to put up a smile to
cover myself from freaking out. Then, he asked each one of us to deliver our
feedback about the school. I was the last person to deliver feedback. I appreciated
the headmaster for bringing up a productive environment in the school. I
realized on how shy and proud was he of himself for being the headmaster of the
best school in Kelantan. Soon after, he mentioned the initiatives that he has
taken while being the headmaster of the school. I was so stunned of the initiatives
taken by him in making sure his school is the number one. He evaluated us and wished
us luck before leaving. We got out of the meeting room and were so excited as
if we obtained straight As in the SPM examinations. While seeing him leaving
us, I felt that he is not actually that mean. He trained himself to be so, in
order for the teachers and students to be disciplined. Right after that, we
went to the staff room and met our mentor and teachers. They were very happy and
wished us luck. It was really hard to leave the little minions but I was forced
to. After all, this is a teacher’s life.
Poetry (Modern poems)
I
felt the responsibility,
When I stepped on the school,
Smiling at the security officer who waved at me,
When I stepped on the school,
Smiling at the security officer who waved at me,
I
felt the responsibility,
When pupils looked proudly,
And greeted me with a smile,
When pupils looked proudly,
And greeted me with a smile,
I
felt the responsibility,
When teachers welcomed me,
Putting a lovely smile on their faces,
When teachers welcomed me,
Putting a lovely smile on their faces,
I
felt the responsibility,
When the headmaster talked with me,
Briefing about the school,
When the headmaster talked with me,
Briefing about the school,
I
felt the responsibility,
When I entered the classroom,
Teaching the students,
When I entered the classroom,
Teaching the students,
I
felt the responsibility,
When students hugged me and cried,
Before I leave the school.
When students hugged me and cried,
Before I leave the school.
I feel like I've entered a time machine, following your words into my childhood memories where I was being canned, but, your feelings inspire me that it's my responsibility not to become that kind of friend, and be a responsible teacher as it may make a pupil feel shameful and even hurt his feelings.
ReplyDeletegreat piece of writing. i was inspired from your poem, the responsibilities of being a teacher. hope to look for more writing piece from you
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