MOW PEI SHAN
Prose fiction - Short Story
The
Warm Words
The soft yellowish clouds are
floating above the sky and the sun is rising slowly from the other side of the
sky. The new day is coming and everyone feels so energetic. The bell rang and
everyone is heading towards their classrooms. There is a girl wearing her
favourite pink baju kurung, standing
nervously outside the office. Suddenly, a man asked her to enter the office and
he shows the place to the nervous girl.
She followed the man and stepped
inside the office slowly. She had butterflies in her stomach. The
others looked at her with a curious and weird face. The judging and new faces that
she saw made her feel uncomfortable in the office. She felt that she wants to leave this room as
soon as possible. After setting up her place in the office, she went to the
washroom quickly for the fresh breath. When she was calming herself in the
washroom, a woman came in. Accidentally, she crashed the woman.
They looked at each other for a
minute. Silence came. The girl was having fast heartbeats in herself. The girl
remembered this woman. This woman is the one who inspired her when she was
young. Surely, she is not going to forget this woman in her entire life. “Hai,
Madam Wong. How are you?” The sentence came out from her deep throat. Without a
moment, the woman said excitedly. “Mow Pei Shan! Why are you here, my dear!? It’s
been a long time that we did not meet since you graduate!”
“Madam, I am here for SBE in this
week.”
“Oh, you are the one who they mentioned
just now! Jom, we go to the canteen
and talk there. So smelly here!”
After that, the girl and the woman
went to the canteen. The woman told the girl that she was going to be her mentor
for this week. Then, the girl expressed her feelings and problems to the woman
such as feeling uncomfortable and nervous when she met the new faces in the
office. However, the girl did not feel awkward
and nervous when she talked to the woman. They had an enjoyable time with each
other and chatting at the canteen. There is no word can be used to describe
this feeling. As good friends, as teacher-student, as mother-daughter, they shared
their sweet and good memories together. The girl felt more motivated after
having a long talk with the woman. Her words calmed the girl easily like how it
worked before. Suddenly, the woman was called to attend a meeting in the
office. Before leaving the girl, the woman said softly, “I trust you can do it!
No worries, my dear. I will guide you like how I did before. I am here for you.”
The words touched the girl’s heart.
Then, she wiped the tears on her face…..
The end.
Prose non-fiction: Diary
Monday, April
1 2019
Dear Diary,
“Yeay, finally, today is the day!” I
exclaimed it in my heart. Today is the first day of my last phase of SBE. I am
so excited because I made a decision a few months before. That is I will be doing
my last phase of SBE at my former primary school, S.J.K. (C) Wan Hwa 1.
Besides, I am doing it with my three lovely friends who are Jie Ning, Ser Yen
and Dorreen. This is also the first time that I do my SBE with them! I’m
looking forward to a lot of happiness and memories with them throughout this week.
This morning, Jie Ning, Ser Yen and
I walked to school together since they are living at my house this week.
Upon reaching the school, I saw there was a male teacher standing outside the
gate and we greeted him politely. I think he is a new teacher because I did not
meet him during my school time. He asked us to wait in the office and soon the Penolong Kanan 1 (PK 1) will meet us. I feel
extremely nervous when I stepped into the schoolyard. There are many
butterflies in my stomach! Words cannot describe my feelings at that moment.
Without delaying time, my friends and I met the PK 1 in his office. After introducing ourselves and explaining our
task to him, the PK 1 brought us to
the main hall because they are having assembly now. Unexpectedly, we were asked
to sit on the stage. This is the first time I step back into this school after
graduating for nine years. When I was still a young primary pupil, I sat under
the stage; and now, I am sitting on the stage as a teacher. I feel so touched
and I realised that I grew up a lot. At the same time, I am wondering who the
headmaster for this school is this year. When the headmaster is called out to
give his speech, I feel that I want to shout it out. This is because the
headmaster, who is giving his speech in front of me, is the male teacher that I
greeted at the gate just now! “Luckily, we greeted him…” my friends whispered
to me.
Then, we met the headmaster in his
office after the assembly. The headmaster welcomed us with his open arms. He
treated us friendly and told us that we can look for him when we need his help.
After that, he told us to use the meeting room for this week. The meeting room
is just beside his office! Besides, there was an interesting story! There are
some teachers that taught me before still servicing for this school such as
Madam Lee, Madam Ng and so on. Their reactions were the same when they recognised
me. They first looked at my face by a curious and weird look. After that, there
was a big grin hung on their faces and they asked, “Ehh, Mow Pei Shan! Why are
you here?!” Let me tell you a secret, dear Diary! I feel so touched and happy
when they recognised me and said out my name. This means that I leave a good
impression for my teachers? Well, I hope I did.
I also met Madam Wong who inspired
me a lot to be a great dancer when I was young! I felt so excited to meet her
because I thought she was retired a few years ago. She gave me a super big hug
when she met me at the canteen. There was a lump in my throat. I felt so warm
because she was like my second mother! We shared a lot of fun and memorable
memories during the good old times. We were as good friends and talking
without any awkwardness. However, the greyish-white hair and the wrinkles on
her face stabbed my heart like a knife. I hope the time stopped and she will not
getting older after this….. Out of my expectation, Mr. Lim told us that Madam
Wong is our mentor for this week. Hence, I will appreciate this chance to spend
time with her and other teachers!
Anyway, dear diary, I think I had to
stop writing now because my mother prepared some delicious supper for me and my
friends. Let me tell you my story in school tomorrow!
Love,
Agnes.
Agnes.
Poetry
Last
Day of School
Ring,
ring, ring.
The bell rang and the kids are running towards their classroom
And
I am walking slowly in the schoolyard, enjoying the views
How
eager I wish,
I
could grab all these views into my sights
Ring,
ring, ring.
I
followed her to the class and it looks the same with ten years ago
Sitting
behind the class, observing how she teaches the kids
Feeling
like I am studying with them together in the class
How
eager I wish,
I
could go back to the good old times
Ring,
ring, ring.
We
brought the kids to the canteen and they called it as the heaven of this school
The
noise and laughter, giving the canteen an energetic life
Gobbling
the delicious food hurriedly
How
eager I wish,
I could enjoy eating this delicious food after
leaving this school
Ring,
ring, ring
It’s
time for us to pack our things
Walking
out from the room and everyone waves hands at us
How
eager I wish,
I
could stay here as a child, living happily without any worries
But
I realised that
It
is the last day of school
And
the reality of life is waiting for me
wow amazing! Great to know that you are enjoying these experiences. Fighting !
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing. Simple and easy to understand. The feelings of the writer is well described! Stay positive, Pei Shan!
ReplyDeleteMasterpiece!!!!!
ReplyDeletewow, i think madam wong is the one who inspire you to become a teacher. great piece of writing. The poem is good, able to understand your feelings when you need to leave the school again.
ReplyDeleteI can feel your sincerity in your writing. Wonderful writing and manage to touch my heart
ReplyDeleteWell developed storyline. However, since it is a short story, it will be better if you make it all in past tenses. Anyway, I like your piece of writing, especially the poem. I am so glad that you had a nice experience in your last sbe. Keep going on! Your life can be happy and simple as you want.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you describe! 👍
ReplyDeleteGood piece of writing. Very interesting story. I feel you girl when you mentioned your primary teacher remember your name. Good luck in future
ReplyDeleteGreat that you had fun during your SBE! Keep doing your good work. Future teacher for my kids.
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